Friday, November 11, 2005

Car trouble

Your car’s nice. Smells nice. Smells...
                                                       …doesn’t smell like you. Smells like
a
nice
smelling
man                         the way I’d like my smell to be for you to like it again.

4 Comments:

Blogger - litol figgy - said...

interesting piece, carl. hits a spot.

2:10 AM  
Blogger stella said...

Nice imagery, it awakens all of my senses.

8:01 PM  
Blogger {illyria} said...

i liked how the mundane suddenly turns into something quite intriguing.

6:39 PM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

wrapped up the profound in the prosaic and laid it so pretty!

2:57 AM  

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