Car trouble
Your car’s nice. Smells nice. Smells...
…doesn’t smell like you. Smells like
a
nice
smelling
man the way I’d like my smell to be for you to like it again.
…doesn’t smell like you. Smells like
a
nice
smelling
man the way I’d like my smell to be for you to like it again.
4 Comments:
interesting piece, carl. hits a spot.
Nice imagery, it awakens all of my senses.
i liked how the mundane suddenly turns into something quite intriguing.
wrapped up the profound in the prosaic and laid it so pretty!
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